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21 Reviews | 9 w/ Responses
I'm a big fan of flash authors that use their artistic ability to promote an important cause, and I believe that is what gave your flash a more unique approach than most flashes on Newgrounds.
The art was very good, and the animation was smooth. I thought that the characters were drawn very well, but could have used a little bit more movement.
Overall it was outstanding, and I hope that your message reaches a lot of people.
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I didn't really think that the comedy aspect of it was really funny. It was a little... dry maybe. I'd try to go for something more unexpected.
The drawings however were very good, although there could have been more variety other than that one scene.
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I doubt that many people will get past the long text introduction, or the annoying beginning music. It needs a little more action to attract the attention deficit newgrounders.
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Unlike the other person who just reviewed, I think that it was good there wasn't any blood and guts in it. You made a clear point that the flash was about the stupidity of the person. Then again, it's up to you should you choose to include more gore in your following movies.
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I'm not sure if the song really fit. It was pretty good though. I could tell you spent time on it. Maybe just work on your drawings. Who couldn't benefit from some extra practise?
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It fit with the mood of the movie. One thing that I didn't like was how you didn't hide your character leg and arm tweens well. It ended up making him look like a puppet. The motion was good, but I found that again it detracted a little from the movie. Overall it was very well done. I liked how the outlines of the characters weren't solid black lines. It was different in a good way. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Sure thing.
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The graphics were pretty good, and the whole thing had a different feel to it. The narration was done flawlessly and made the whole thing even more enjoyable.
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I like it. It's really interactive. Must have taken awhile to put together. Good job. <3
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There was even a little bit of grandma action there that I liked.
It was full of win.
I didn't really like mademoiselle's part though.
Author's Response:
We couldn't have done it without you. <3
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It was pretty good. Most of the submissions were well done for being made in such a short period of time. One thing I didn't really like about the submission was the music choice. It didn't fit very well with all of the submissions but that's just my opinion. Otherwise it was well done and better than I thought it would be.
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